Thursday, 13 November 2008

pancakes and jelly 5 a day poster


my 5 a day poster

4 comments:

TheElectricLightOrchestra said...

I like the effect of the picture with the uneven border but I'm not so sure about the font. Maybe you could try something a little bolder and more appealing to the age group the poster is meant to be directed at, but other than that, brilliant! :D

Pie Guy said...

I like the background lots of people used dull backgrounds but yours is nice and bright.
I think the picture and the font type ruin this poster , the picture hasn't blended well with background ang the font seems a bit boring other than that well done!

maniac123 said...

I like the effect around the orange even if it was accidental! The writing however, doesn't stick out as much as I would like so I would adjust size, boldness and colour to make your great poster even better!

Anonymous said...

The colour scheme on the background is very bright and appealing, however the black text is difficult to read; perhaps you could make it bigger or change the colour? Other than that, it's great!