This is my presentation! please comment it!
http://docs.google.com/Presentation?docid=dd24b4xc_69g2tdcccb&hl=en
thank you!
Thursday, 22 January 2009
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Team Blog for year 9 ICT class taught by Mrs Fincher and Mrs McQuade at JFK school
3 comments:
I like your varied editing of images. You have done some good research for extra information. You have used a clear distinctive style on all your slides.
I agree with all AMQ has said - there are a couple of things I'd add.
Check your original presentation - one of the images you've used seems to be a bit out of place.
I quite like the way that you have put all your information in the presentation and your images at the end. However, I think you need to think about your use of clipart - it is OK, and I actually think you've used it well, but... it is a bit 'old-fashioned' these days. When it was difficult to get photos onto presentations and the Internet it was the best thing available, but now we have digital cameras to produce good photos. You wouldn't expect to see clipart on a professional website would you?
It is really great but the fact page has to many facts and it a bit confusing but anyways it is great. The colour is really afective and the pics are great.
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