Team Blog for year 9 ICT class taught by Mrs Fincher and Mrs McQuade at JFK school
I like your consistent style. Make sure you check your spelling. More images would be good. Your images on the final page are a bit blurred.
I agree completely with AMQ - the style and layout are good, but you need to check your spelling, and decide if there are better pictures to use
heyy...xthis is a great bit of work but there is quiet a fare bit of writing in this and not so many pictures but otherwise it is very good!well done i see you have work hard on this! x
yeah it's good apart from the spelling. also see if you could get some better pictures. everything else is great though
good presentation, but it could do with some more pictures. the background was a good colour and the writing was good (:
i liked this!! however i think the slides are a bit boring and need some pictures on the slides to make it more interesting to read. on a possitive note the infomation was vey interesting.:-)
good presentation, but the whole " DO NOT LITTER " was a bit threatining. You could have said " PLEASE HELP THE SCHOOL" . And check your spelling.
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I like your consistent style. Make sure you check your spelling. More images would be good. Your images on the final page are a bit blurred.
I agree completely with AMQ - the style and layout are good, but you need to check your spelling, and decide if there are better pictures to use
heyy...x
this is a great bit of work but there is quiet a fare bit of writing in this and not so many pictures but otherwise it is very good!
well done i see you have work hard on this! x
yeah it's good apart from the spelling. also see if you could get some better pictures. everything else is great though
good presentation, but it could do with some more pictures. the background was a good colour and the writing was good (:
i liked this!! however i think the slides are a bit boring and need some pictures on the slides to make it more interesting to read. on a possitive note the infomation was vey interesting.
:-)
good presentation, but the whole " DO NOT LITTER " was a bit threatining. You could have said " PLEASE HELP THE SCHOOL" . And check your spelling.
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