I love the presentation, it's very good. But on slide2 (I think it was) you just need to put a bit of space between the first and secong line. Other than that, it was great!
Brown Sauce, That was ok, it kept me watching and reading. I liked the bin in the corner, that was nice. I also like the recycle logo which you used as bullet points. Well done!
That was okay, it kept my attention well. I liked the bin in the corner that worked as a logo, I alkso like the way yo used the recycling sign as bullet points, very creative. Although, there was a little too much information to take in. Other than that, well done!
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this presentation is very good!
well done i see you have worked hard on this :) x
I love the presentation, it's very good. But on slide2 (I think it was) you just need to put a bit of space between the first and secong line. Other than that, it was great!
Brown Sauce, That was ok, it kept me watching and reading. I liked the bin in the corner, that was nice. I also like the recycle logo which you used as bullet points. Well done!
That was okay, it kept my attention well. I liked the bin in the corner that worked as a logo, I alkso like the way yo used the recycling sign as bullet points, very creative. Although, there was a little too much information to take in. Other than that, well done!
it was quite good , however it does remind me of simpletons presentation. especially the bin in the corner. well done over all though.
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