This is very colourful, and I think it is attractive - do you think that it is attractive to your target audience as well?
You might like to think about whether the photo is really appropriate for the age group.
Additionally, this is a functional skills task, and you must stick to functional skills rules - in other words you MUST use both of the pictures that you selected from the student shared area as well as the text. This means that although the work is attractive, then you won't get any marks from it. You need to go back to the C section of this task - and adapt that to look more like this.
I really like this. It stands out and is very colourful, it would definatly catch your eye walking down the hall.
Hovever, we were asked to use two pictures for the poster, and i am not quite sure you have done this. Also i think you should maybe have seperated the writing a bit rather than having it in all one paragraph.
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This is very colourful, and I think it is attractive - do you think that it is attractive to your target audience as well?
You might like to think about whether the photo is really appropriate for the age group.
Additionally, this is a functional skills task, and you must stick to functional skills rules - in other words you MUST use both of the pictures that you selected from the student shared area as well as the text. This means that although the work is attractive, then you won't get any marks from it. You need to go back to the C section of this task - and adapt that to look more like this.
I agree with cjf that the folder in the shared area states it is not for adults, and I beleive you should redo this poster for a younger audience.
I really like this. It stands out and is very colourful, it would definatly catch your eye walking down the hall.
Hovever, we were asked to use two pictures for the poster, and i am not quite sure you have done this.
Also i think you should maybe have seperated the writing a bit rather than having it in all one paragraph.
I really likethe colours and the big picture.
The one thing that could be different is the title ♥☺
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